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Re: John E. Doolittle, page updated
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Wed, 12 Jan 2000 16:53:15 GMT
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I am honored. Thank you.
On to another suggestion. As you have already set out in the story,
Doolittle sends money back to his wife in England to provide for her.
However, her affair with Waite becomes more public, eventually reaching the
ears of young Aurora. Already in love with Doolittle, and now angered at
the adulterous actions of Mrs. Doolittle (how could she treat such a fine
man so horribly?), Aurora fakes her own kidnapping, and eventually joins up
with Doolittle.
NEW SUBPLOT: Aurora tells Doolittle of his wife's infidelity. Although he
understands, he is none the less disappointed and decides to discontinue his
self-imposed support payments. When Waite hears about Aurora and Doolittle,
he is incensed. But he is even more upset about Doolittle cuting off his
support payments to Mrs. Doolittle (Waite has been "counseling" Mrs.
Doolittle on her marital situation at his normal hourly fee ever since
Doolittle left months ago. Once Doolittle stops payments, Mrs. Doolittle
can no longer afford to continue employing Waite on her case and Waite loses
one of his most profitable clients).
Tim
Richard Parsons <rparsons@hinet.net.au> wrote in message
news:Fo89z6.F4v@lugnet.com...
> Gentlemen (and others ;-)
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> Timothy Freshly has joined the writer's guild. Still a few empty chairs • at
> the authors' table, and plenty of rum.
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> http://www.hinet.net.au/~rparsons/port/doo/welcome.htm
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> regards
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> Richard
> Still baldly going...
> Check out Port Block at http://www.hinet.net.au/~rparsons/
> Note the change in URL - Port Block is moving over the next month or so • (to
> new and larger accommodations)
> Do adjust your set.
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>
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| Timothy D. Freshly wrote another worthy sub-plot element. Minor mods makes this "Aurora gently tells Doolittle of his wife's infidelity. In the best traditions of the understanding male, Doolittle repressed his hurt feelings, saw his wife's issues (...) (24 years ago, 13-Jan-00, to lugnet.pirates)
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| Gentlemen (and others ;-) Timothy Freshly has joined the writer's guild. Still a few empty chairs at the authors' table, and plenty of rum. (URL) baldly going... Check out Port Block at (URL) the change in URL - Port Block is moving over the next (...) (24 years ago, 12-Jan-00, to lugnet.pirates)
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