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In lugnet.castle, Alan Findlay writes:
<some snippage>
> The only "glaring failure" would be if you stopped writing altogether.
> You've got something that you want to say, that's why you write. Hopefully
> this process is helpful for refining your delivery so that your message can
> be heard and understood. Don't give up. Keep working at it, and over time
> you'll be able to develop a style that both reflects who you are and conveys
> your thoughts to your audience.
>
> Alan
True. I don't believe I'm going to quit any time soon,
though. :)
I'm probably going to retype the original project
(since a lot of it is very similar), so hopefully
It will *eventually* become a drawing read. The
story seems fine, but the execution of it doesn't.
<<_Matt Hein_>>
Fellow lego enthusiast.
If I rewrite this again, this will probably be
my third attempt at the project.
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| Hi Matt, I read some of your writing (not sure if this was before or after you edited it). It is actualy quite good in many ways (but that says a lot about the reader I am). If you want my advice it would be to create some contrasts. Such as some (...) (22 years ago, 19-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| In lugnet.castle, Matt Hein writes: <snippage> (...) The only "glaring failure" would be if you stopped writing altogether. You've got something that you want to say, that's why you write. Hopefully this process is helpful for refining your delivery (...) (22 years ago, 18-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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