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Hello, just checking .castle recently, and there
didn't seem to be much activity, so I decided, why
not unveil the next part of my online novella,
Anachronistic Skies. The most recent addition deals
with some rather interesting dialogue.
Hope it is of some interest to the community.
My recent addition. -Order of the Falcon, part three.
http://www.lugnet.com/~1112/Fantasy/Osprey
If you missed them earlier...
http://www.lugnet.com/~1112/Fantasy
Anyhow, as you can probably tell, some of these
are turning out to be long reads, so if you have
a few minutes, just read a small selection and
tell me what you think. Your comments are *much*
appreciated!
Peace out,
<<_Matt Hein_<<
Fellow lego enthusiast.
Also, jsut part three was several weeks worth of writing
after school. (albeit a month, I believe.)
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| (...) Superbly written Matt. You've really captured the essence of aristocracy in the way your characters speak. I must say the amount of five dollar words in your story signifigantly dwarfs the number in my own. However, and maybe it's just me, and (...) (22 years ago, 16-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| Well, Matt, I'm not sure how much my comments will be "appreciated" as they are going to be in the vein of "discouraging words". I got about half-way through the second line of the first sentence, then pretty much gave up. I scrolled down through (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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