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In lugnet.castle, Kevin Wilson writes:
> No, I didn't get bored, to be honest I got really
> really irritated with all the big words thrown in
> without apparently knowing what they mean. It gets
> in the way of the communication.
I can honestly say I knew what they meant, just
improperly used some of them in the dialogue.
(Several of the uses were largely inappropriate
as pointed out earlier. I'm still reviewing for
phrases to edit out.)
My apologies if this served as an interference
to communication. I'm just wordy at times. :)
> I just went back and took another look, and I
> see you've done a lot of editing. Major improvement!
Thanks, it's good to know that I'm at least
headed in the right direction in the
communications department. Now, what scene
to fix next? (probably the battle scene.)
<<_Matt Hein_>>
Fellow lego enthusiast
O s p r e y
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| Matt, Your mis-use of long words is too frequent to catalogue. If you honestly knew what they meant, why mis-use them? If you plan to use long words, I suggest you check each and every one with a dictionary - preferably one that has quotations from (...) (22 years ago, 24-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) No, I didn't get bored, to be honest I got really really irritated with all the big words thrown in without apparently knowing what they mean. It gets in the way of the communication. I just went back and took another look, and I see you've (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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