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Re: Jormungand Carrier Strike Craft
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lugnet.space
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Mon, 4 Oct 2004 01:50:05 GMT
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Several forms and features of this remind me of my
Dugong; if I was an
inspiration, than thanks for highest level of compliment!
Obviously, then, I really dig the fin on the underside of the ship and the tiles
immediately above it. I think it also has great form for the majority of it, but
there are a few things that I would advise revisiting.
That’s a great use of the coffin piece which in turn has a great shape for this
type of vehicle. It would be nice to see some subtle elongated hexagons echoed
elsewhere.
The front gun looks a little unfocused. I’d streamline it and bulk it up a
little.
I also think the dragon head/tail disrupts the shape some. It might be
interesting to actually widen out that part some with some winglike structures,
and focus on evoking a dragon with the nose of the ship, which already captures
that some with the 1x2 slope peak pieces. Well done teeth there would be
awesome.
Thanks for sharing, and I hope my comments are helpful/thought provoking. If
not, no worries, as this still looks great as is.
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| (...) Ahh, the organic ship! Yes, I do remember your ship and enjoyed its unique features. (...) Yep, I can see where more hexagons would be good. The coffin was a real spontaneous addition which could be highlighted more. (...) I like my gun, but (...) (20 years ago, 4-Oct-04, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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| I finally built a ship that looks like it means business. I have been inspired by most all of the themed ships you guys have been building and posting here on .space. Thanks for the inspiration. Now I just need to build a capital/carrier ship. A (...) (20 years ago, 2-Oct-04, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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