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Re: Jormungand Carrier Strike Craft
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lugnet.space
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Date:
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Mon, 4 Oct 2004 22:19:46 GMT
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In lugnet.space, Aaron Knox wrote:
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Several forms and features of this remind me of my
Dugong; if I was an
inspiration, than thanks for highest level of compliment!
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Ahh, the organic ship! Yes, I do remember your ship and enjoyed its unique
features.
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Obviously, then, I really dig the fin on the underside of the ship and the
tiles immediately above it. I think it also has great form for the majority
of it, but there are a few things that I would advise revisiting.
That’s a great use of the coffin piece which in turn has a great shape for
this type of vehicle. It would be nice to see some subtle elongated hexagons
echoed elsewhere.
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Yep, I can see where more hexagons would be good. The coffin was a real
spontaneous addition which could be highlighted more.
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The front gun looks a little unfocused. I’d streamline it and bulk it up a
little.
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I like my gun, but it is a little weak, I admit. I have been interested in
reproducing some of the gattling type guns I have seen but thought I would start
with something of my own.
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I also think the dragon head/tail disrupts the shape some. It might be
interesting to actually widen out that part some with some winglike
structures, and focus on evoking a dragon with the nose of the ship, which
already captures that some with the 1x2 slope peak pieces. Well done teeth
there would be awesome.
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My problem is it is too skorpion like and I had thought about a new “nose job”.
I like your ideas.
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Thanks for sharing, and I hope my comments are helpful/thought provoking. If
not, no worries, as this still looks great as is.
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I appreciate your comments Aaron. Definitely thought provoking. I will revisit
the fighter the next chance I get.
Thanks again.
Chris
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