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Re: New MOC: Falke Raumschloss Dropship
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Newsgroups:
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lugnet.space
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Date:
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Sun, 3 Oct 2004 23:19:43 GMT
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In lugnet.space, Daniel Rubin wrote:
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In lugnet.announce.moc, Daniel Sibley wrote:
Ok, I have some thoughts on this thing. One, I think the arches are looking
good, and it’s a good start.
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Thanks!
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I think maybe you should try and organize the
blue better, into a more cohesive pattern.
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I agree. I see how this is a problem in some places.
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I think the landing gear needs to
be beefed up, it looks a little spindly to support a craft that large. I’d
also loose the starwars guns on the top.
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The starwars guns were intended as a sort of greeb. Did they come across as
armament?
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Also, there’s a toilet and sink in
there... but no bunks or food or anything... it seems a little odd to me.
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I think of this ship sort of like a military greyhound bus...That is, it flies
on missions of several hours but is not intended for the soldiers to live on it
for an extended period. A bathroom might be necessary for this time but bed
should not be. Hmm, seats would be good, though.
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The
bridge also looks a little cramped, you might want to stretch it out longer
or something, give the ship a tail (which you could slap a turret on). The
ramp looks good, but is probably the most important part of the ship to have
coverage from the guns.
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More guns... For some reason when I build military craft I forget about the
weapons until the end. I avoided that problem this time, but it’s still not
heavily armed.
Thanks for reviewing!
Mr. Dan
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Message is in Reply To:
 | | Re: New MOC: Falke Raumschloss Dropship
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| (...) Ok, I have some thoughts on this thing. One, I think the arches are looking good, and it's a good start. I think maybe you should try and organize the blue better, into a more cohesive pattern. I think the landing gear needs to be beefed up, (...) (20 years ago, 3-Oct-04, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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