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Hello and ades (*salutes*) Well, two things have turned out in today. It turns out I have got a promotion to the Spc. Forces Commander (I'm also a captain) and been killed in a raid on (URL) Uen-Fleeb>'s fortress (no, I'm not that stupid). Actually, (...) (21 years ago, 11-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Oh and BTW, I'm not a Spc. Ops Commander, I'm a Spc. Ops Captain only. Thank you. Cheers (*zoom*) Spc. Ops Captain Hennen (21 years ago, 11-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Did you get permission to use other people's universes in your stories? (...) Well we shall see when it is moderated. (...) Hmmm... If you are claiming to be a Spc. Ops Captain of the LSF then you need the Grand Admiral's permission/promotion. (...) (21 years ago, 11-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Eh, I'm not really that worried about it. "Lego Space Force" is a vague enough term that other people can use it. I haven't trademarked it or anything. ~M (21 years ago, 11-Jun-03, to lugnet.space)
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(...) Whoops. (...) Aw shucks. (...) ^ ^" I ahhhhh.........nevermind. (...) Okay, I hereby demote myself to Lt. Captain. Thank you. Cheers (*groans*) Lt. Captain Hennen (21 years ago, 11-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Well Ok then. (...) Eh? You boycotting your rank now or something? I would have thought your universe was more important. Maybe I am totally off-base and it was just because you didn't feel like typing it and wanted to use the tilde key. -Mike (...) (21 years ago, 11-Jun-03, to lugnet.space)
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(...) Eh, I'm just out of sorts this afternoon. Blah. I'm sure I'll be grandadmiraling again after I go home and eat some chinese food and have a drink. ~M (21 years ago, 11-Jun-03, to lugnet.space)
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(...) Is the Asian-American food really good over there on the West Coast? Vancouver is supposed to have some kick@$$ restaurants... ~T (21 years ago, 11-Jun-03, to lugnet.space)
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(...) Are you kidding? In SF, at least, the Asian style restaurants are only approached in number by the good Mexican joints. And there are a *lot* of them. Fortune cookies were *invented* in San Francisco. ___...___b r a n d o n h a r r i s___ (...) (21 years ago, 11-Jun-03, to lugnet.space)
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(...) Oh yes. We have a high Asian population in these parts. "You know you live in Seattle if you know the difference between Japanese, Chinese, and Thai food" :D -Grand Admiral and Keeper of Fleebnorks (URL) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) mmmmm...fortune cookies (URL) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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DOES ANYBODY WANT TO REVIEW THIS???...??? (sorry if I peeved anybody) Cheers (*sighs heavily*) Spc. Ops. Captain Hennen (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) The folder is not moderated so the only person who can see it is you. Either post deep-links, which have the URL ending in .jpg for each image, or just wait. (2 URLs) >> (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Sorry about that. I overreacted.....................I thought about the Gauss attack Craft post too much.....sorry.....(*shaky salute*) Cheers (*tense face*) Spc. Ops. Captain Hennen (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Errr....just gotta wait....tell me immediatly when you have seen it Fleebnork Exterminator First Class! Thank you! Cheers (*clink*) Spc. Ops. Captain Hennen (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) ... (...) Well, Dean, this is a good start. Looks like you've got a good sense of colour scheme, and the cabin is well laid out. You might want to consider sticking more external weapons/thrusters/gizmos on the outside of the ship, I think (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) I agree. It is certainly a unique approach to space ship design. And I mean that in a good way. Its still a little rough around the edges, but it definately shows promise. -Mike Petrucelli (URL) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) ^ ^" Hey thanks guys! This ship usually stays out of big frays but there is a really fast firing autocannon in the front. The shells are explosive and can cause lots of damage. I would have liked a TIE windsheild for the bottom winshield but (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) You shouldn't compare yourself to Jassim, he's a cyborg, and therefore, should only be judged incomparison to other automatons. (...) I just can't jump on the warm and fuzzy bandwagon here. What the hell is this thing? A red space-winnebago? I (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) (URL) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Dan, have you run out of bricks or something??? Cheers, (URL) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Dean, Go back and look how many posts in this entire thread are from you. Dude, you got diahrrea of the postin'. in a word... CHILL. Your MOC. Uses more than 1 glass color Is rather boxy Needs more engine But.. Is a step in the right direction (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) How horrible! That poor cyborg is morphing into Dan! The horror.......the horror.... ;) -G (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) snip (...) I agree. Post. Wait a bit for everyone to digest what you've given them, then reply to their responses. As to the deep-link thing, someone else has already addressed that. If you aren't generating the number of replies to your post (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) I knew it!... I can just hear the line he must use on the ladies... "your clothes, give them to me..." Anyone who builds like Dan must be from the future. I'm afraid we'll have to trick him into a giant industrial press and kill him. -Keith (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Capt.Hennen, This creation shows alot of promise. It is pretty good as a step one into spaceship design and building. Some tips: you've got a 2 level ship here. while they can be done well (check out adm.giddens' (URL) pelican>), they are (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Thank you. (...) Yeah, I know. (...) Well, I would like to do that but I don't have many smooth, curved parts. (...) Ah, yes! (...) Hmmm..got to roll that over in my mind for a bit. (...) Ooooooo........I'm soooooo jealous! ^ ^" (...) 0.0 My (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) ...snip... (...) This is probably the most useful Constructive Critisism post I have ever seen. If he doesn't learn something from this, I certainly have. Not that I would suggest EVERY MOC-response be formatted like this, but wow you put some (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) It's the technical bits that are visible from the outside of the ship. Examples: (URL) should look like they do something though. If they just look like they are tacked on (which in reality is the real truth) is spoils the effect. -Duane (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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-snip- (...) Thanks for the kind words. I try. Personally I really love spaceship creations, but it seems sometimes that only the best are really making them. they seem so great that it becomes very daunting to try to do something like that. And I (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Ehhh I don't know. I think there is a place for boxiness, but there is a trick to it. I'm not even sure if I can tell you what that trick is. For example: My (URL) Gazelle> was a pretty boxy ship, but pretty popular in the Space crowd. Trevor (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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-snip- (...) -snip- That is another limiting factor. here's a pic of one of my (URL) creations> (yes a castle creation, bear with me). I think it is kinda creative, and it kinda is. But it is nothing to write home about. I made it small and simple (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) COOL! (...) That ship is okay. (...) Yeah, thanks a lot. I've recently upgraded the engine space and the afterburner is HUGE (well, not "HUGE" but covers the entire back of the ship)! (...) Your tips helped a LOT. Thanks. Cheers (*tinkers*) (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) snip (...) (*grins*) I see. (...) Right! (...) That's what I would do too. (...) ^.^ That's how I usually do it. But, alas, I think this one is here to stay (well, maybe I'll rip it apart one of these days but I'm going to keep this for a long (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) -snip- maybe I should have entitled my post "Tips for the Beginning Spaceship Builder." I meant it as the rules to follow to get a good responce. But as with any set of rules in any artform, they are made to be broken. -Lenny (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) Well, as a piece of criticism to counteract the cloying fuzziness of our space forum, this is a promising start Keith, but I think it needs a bit of work. Two big changes you could make to your criticism is 1) try subtler remarks than "it's as (...) (21 years ago, 13-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) So much so that I made my own version at a slightly smaller scale. (2 URLs) Still one of my favorites. I think it blends general .space and star wars themes very well. And even then quite a few people liked it. (the second pic has improved (...) (21 years ago, 13-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) When I said "favorites", I was of course refering to Mark's original. Mine was a pale shadow by way of comparison... :*) (21 years ago, 13-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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(...) I agree. It has been brought to my attention (and rightfully so) that my review of the 'Ghost' was over the top. Apparently I've angered the Space gods. Since I 'went off' on him in public, I publicly apologize to Dean H. for the post. I'm not (...) (21 years ago, 13-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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"leonard hoffman" <glencaer@hotmail.com> wrote in message news:HGE2q7.JG7@lugnet.com... (...) <a lot of great points and examples snipped> (...) good (...) key (...) he's (...) great (...) This I think is one of the most important points. It's kind (...) (21 years ago, 13-Jun-03, to lugnet.space)
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"Dr. H" <bthennen@hotmail.com> wrote in message news:HGE3K9.oGL@lugnet.com... (...) <snip> (...) MOCs (...) idea. Heh, um... you're gonna have to get over that one... ;) Seriously though, I was in the same place about 5 years ago (when I came out (...) (21 years ago, 13-Jun-03, to lugnet.space)
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