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Re: The Ghost
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lugnet.space
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Date:
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Fri, 13 Jun 2003 01:44:33 GMT
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In lugnet.space, Keith Goldman wrote:
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I just can’t jump on the warm and fuzzy bandwagon here. What the hell is
this thing? A red space-winnebago? I guess you are going for the whole
space-comedy thing here, but I have to say that its about as interesting as a
bag of hammers. The guns are uninspired, and don’t live up to your outlandish
claims... the engine... man it is horrible. The mixed-matched canopies have
got to go. I understand you have parts limitations (as we all do) but find
another solution. Ok again I’m force to think that you are tying for a
different sort of look..like red dwarf, or hitchhikers guide. If that is the
case, you have succeded. On the positive side, the interior consoles were
pretty good, and the ladder. And does it land on its verticle thrusters?
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Well, as a piece of criticism to counteract the cloying fuzziness of our space
forum, this is a promising start Keith, but I think it needs a bit of work.
Two big changes you could make to your criticism is 1) try subtler remarks than
“it’s as interesting as a bag of hammers” and 2) try actually making suggestions
as to what’s actually wrong with various things - like the engine, saying it’s
horrible just makes you sound immature, if you specify some actual design flaws
and possible solutions it sounds a lot more intelligent... not to mention being
much more helpful. I think you’ll also find that trying to think up possible
improvements can also help form new construction ideas of your own (it’s
happened to me before).
Anyways, good luck with your next critique Keith. ;-)
Cheers,
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| (...) I agree. It has been brought to my attention (and rightfully so) that my review of the 'Ghost' was over the top. Apparently I've angered the Space gods. Since I 'went off' on him in public, I publicly apologize to Dean H. for the post. I'm not (...) (21 years ago, 13-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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| (...) You shouldn't compare yourself to Jassim, he's a cyborg, and therefore, should only be judged incomparison to other automatons. (...) I just can't jump on the warm and fuzzy bandwagon here. What the hell is this thing? A red space-winnebago? I (...) (21 years ago, 12-Jun-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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