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Re: My first attempt at a story. The Forest of Blood part 1.
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lugnet.castle
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Tue, 16 Jan 2001 12:41:20 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Michael Campbell writes:
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> Joel Jacobsen wrote:
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> > This is actually an experiment of sorts - one that I could use feedback on.
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> My official feedback is that you should keep doing this! The story was very
> well done, and the combining the foreground and the background was very well
> done. I'm a sucker for historical myth, even if the 'history' is ficticious,
> and the bit with the flowers was just wonderful. Keep it up!
Thanks for the input, Michael!
I'll try to keep it up.:) I just hope that the rest of my story meets with
as much approval. If there's one thing I, myself, don't like - it's a story
that builds up and then fizzles and goes flat. (Gibson's Idoru comes to mind)
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> IronMike (mecampbellesq@aol.com)
> ((who hopes to start work on HIS MOC project soon...))
I can understand that - if it weren't for the fact that we reorganized our
basement with the sole purpose of making a LEGO area, I'd have never started
anything in the last 6 months.
Joel Jacoben
http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Main/lego%20creations.htm
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