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Subject:	My first attempt at a story. The Forest of Blood part 1.
Newsgroups:	lugnet.castle
Date:	Mon, 15 Jan 2001 06:00:46 GMT
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After claiming for the better part of a year to get involved and share something I've done, I have finally can. :) While it's not really a MOC, it's the beginning of a story that provides some background and introduction to the realm I intend to place my future Castle creations into, as well as for four key characters that I plan to have around for a long time to come. http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Castle/Fob-main.htm This is actually an experiment of sorts - one that I could use feedback on. When I started out, it certainly seemed like a good idea, but I did not realize just how difficult it would be to find background photos of just exactly what I wanted. I have enough to complete the remaining two episodes of the story, but beyond that - should I keep it up as stories dictate or let this end as something better off left to the pro's? :) Joel Jacobsen http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Main/lego%20creations.htm

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		Re: My first attempt at a story. The Forest of Blood part 1.
(...) Forest of Blood idea, the flowers blooming where soldiers have died... and what was that shadow? <shiver> Can't wait to see the rest... (...) Alright, feedback? Hmm. You might want to check tenses - this is something I have repeatedly had (...) (24 years ago, 15-Jan-01, to lugnet.castle)

		Re: My first attempt at a story. The Forest of Blood part 1.
(...) which is exactly what any good story wants to do. Bravo!! I enjoyed the bit about what keeps the animals away (don't want to spoil it for any who haven't read it yet). I also like how you mingled the lego with the backgrounds - it works very (...) (24 years ago, 16-Jan-01, to lugnet.castle)

		Re: My first attempt at a story. The Forest of Blood part 1.
(...) Well, I checked it out earlier today at school, and I think it's fantastic! Very good for your first story. I was amazed how much image-editing you did for it. I particularly liked the ones where the LEGO path connected to the "real" path, (...) (24 years ago, 16-Jan-01, to lugnet.castle)

		Re: My first attempt at a story. The Forest of Blood part 1.
(...) My official feedback is that you should keep doing this! The story was very well done, and the combining the foreground and the background was very well done. I'm a sucker for historical myth, even if the 'history' is ficticious, and the bit (...) (24 years ago, 16-Jan-01, to lugnet.castle)

		Re: My first attempt at a story. The Forest of Blood part 1.
Ok, I really meant to reply to this when this was in the spotlight, but at the time I was pulling my hair out with my own update, so now that I have the time, I SHALL BE HEARD! :) (...) Sharing a piece of work is not necessarily important, as long (...) (24 years ago, 21-Jan-01, to lugnet.castle)

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