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Re: My first attempt at a story. The Forest of Blood part 1.
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lugnet.castle
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Tue, 16 Jan 2001 08:30:35 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Bill Farkas writes:
> In lugnet.castle, Joel Jacobsen writes:
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> > http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Castle/Fob-main.htm
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> Great storyline Joel! I loved it! Once it got started it really grabbed me,
> which is exactly what any good story wants to do. Bravo!! I enjoyed the bit
> about what keeps the animals away (don't want to spoil it for any who
> haven't read it yet).
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> I also like how you mingled the lego with the backgrounds - it works very well.
Thanks, Bill! It's no Chipmu..I mean Wolf ram..but it turned out a whole lot
better than I expected. :):) (don't hurt me! hehe)
> > This is actually an experiment of sorts - one that I could use feedback on.
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> Outside of minor grammatical errors (which we are all prone to - who can
> figure out that junk anyway?!), it was fine.
I can't believe how much I've forgotten since school. Grammatical errors..
aren't those the broken crackers you always find in the package...? :)
Joel Jacobsen
http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Main/lego%20creations.htm
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