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Re: My first attempt at a story. The Forest of Blood part 1.
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lugnet.castle
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Tue, 16 Jan 2001 05:07:05 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Joel Jacobsen writes:
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> While it's not really a MOC, it's the beginning of a story that provides
> some background and introduction to the realm I intend to place my future
> Castle creations into, as well as for four key characters that I plan to
> have around for a long time to come.
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> http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Castle/Fob-main.htm
Great storyline Joel! I loved it! Once it got started it really grabbed me,
which is exactly what any good story wants to do. Bravo!! I enjoyed the bit
about what keeps the animals away (don't want to spoil it for any who
haven't read it yet).
I also like how you mingled the lego with the backgrounds - it works very well.
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> This is actually an experiment of sorts - one that I could use feedback on.
Outside of minor grammatical errors (which we are all prone to - who can
figure out that junk anyway?!), it was fine.
Kudos,
Bill
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| After claiming for the better part of a year to get involved and share something I've done, I have finally can. :) While it's not really a MOC, it's the beginning of a story that provides some background and introduction to the realm I intend to (...) (23 years ago, 15-Jan-01, to lugnet.castle)
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