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Re: Chapter 2, plus 2 MOCs, too
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Sat, 29 Mar 2003 22:12:19 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Leonard Hoffman writes:
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> > http://www.ozbricks.net/ikros/chaos.html
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> Anthony!
> First let me say what a great job on the story. I love the development of
> Greylen (who was my fav character from the first story), and also the
> continuing exploration into Garadaine and Garalt. That dynamic really has me
> intrigued.
Thanks much! I'm glad someone enjoyed it.
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> There are some slight grammar problems, so read through it sometime to pick
> those out.
I'm not at my own computer at the momement, but when I get the chance I will go
through and check for those.
> Also, in the creations section, on Greylen's tower, the interior picture-links
> all point to the first picture. To say it another way, they all link to the
> same picture.
Fixed.
> Good job!
> I eagerly await more!
> -Lenny
Thanks again. Unfortunately, I am quickly becoming discouraged with my story
and in my website in general. Ever since my website was Slashdotted, I've
recieved countless emails, online messages and website and 'blog' links that
constantly complain about my poor writing ability, poor implimentation of my
website and story, and my blatent ripping off of The Lord of the Rings Trilogy.
I do try my best to not let these things get to me, but there is only so many
things that I can read before I begin to wonder if they're seeing something
wrong with what I am doing that I do not. It also makes me wonder perhaps if I
should have stopped with just one story and moved on to something else.
But don't worry though, I'll at least put all I have into Chapter 3, and I will
still try my best to finish this story, just as I finished the first.
Anyway, forgive my ramblings. I guess sometimes we all need to vent our
frustrations in public.
And thanks for the feedback.
--Anthony
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Message has 5 Replies:
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| Hey Anthony, I just wanted to put my two cents worth in, if that is okay. I like your story and website. I don't know how many people I have shown your story to, but it is a lot. I am sorry to hear that you have gotten flooded with criticism. It (...) (22 years ago, 30-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) My apologies for the lack of posting this week... School, life and *gasp* reality caught up with me again... I did take the extra few minutes to check out your additions, Anthony. As always, stellar job, and another presing reason for myself (...) (22 years ago, 30-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| In lugnet.castle, Anthony Sava writes: O.K. Anthony, I just read your first 2 chapters (and am back online). But it was more this post that struck me. Here is a great quote from Tolkien that appeared in the preface to the second edition of LOTR (...) (22 years ago, 5-Apr-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) Hey Anthony. Like others have said before, ignore comments that are coming from a place of ignorance. So many people feel they have a right to just break down something just because they can. Their comments are meant to make themselves feel (...) (22 years ago, 7-Apr-03, to lugnet.castle)
| | | Re: Chapter 2, plus 2 MOCs, too
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| (...) Anthony, I'd completely ignore them. Do what you do because it is fun to you, not for others' approval. Slashdot especially seems largely inhabited by people who can't do much aside from sit on their own butts and insult others. I've actually (...) (22 years ago, 7-Apr-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) Greylen (who was my fav character from the first story), and also the continuing exploration into Garadaine and Garalt. That dynamic really has me intrigued. There are some slight grammar problems, so read through it sometime to pick those (...) (22 years ago, 28-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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