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Re: Chapter 2, plus 2 MOCs, too
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lugnet.castle
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Fri, 28 Mar 2003 00:15:04 GMT
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> http://www.ozbricks.net/ikros/chaos.html
Anthony!
First let me say what a great job on the story. I love the development of
Greylen (who was my fav character from the first story), and also the
continuing exploration into Garadaine and Garalt. That dynamic really has me
intrigued.
There are some slight grammar problems, so read through it sometime to pick
those out.
Also, in the creations section, on Greylen's tower, the interior picture-links
all point to the first picture. To say it another way, they all link to the
same picture.
Good job!
I eagerly await more!
-Lenny
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| (...) Thanks much! I'm glad someone enjoyed it. (...) I'm not at my own computer at the momement, but when I get the chance I will go through and check for those. (...) Fixed. (...) Thanks again. Unfortunately, I am quickly becoming discouraged with (...) (22 years ago, 29-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| Feel free to visit my website to see what's new. Under the 'Creations' link, you will find my new MOCs: --The Village of Dahyart --Greylen's Tower And for those of you who would like to read it, under the 'Story' link, you'll find the second chapter (...) (22 years ago, 27-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general, lugnet.org.us.texlug, lugnet.publish) !
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