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Re: Chapter 1 of "The chronicles of Scar"
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Mon, 15 May 2000 13:27:17 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Shiri Dori writes:
> Hi!
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> Chapter 1 is up, see it here:
> http://www.geocities.com/shiri_lego/chapter1.html
<snip>
I really liked your story so far. Great photography too. I was a little
puzzled as to who was saying what in the following snippet:
The creature turns around to see a sentry guard.
“What is it?” it asks the guard.
“Who are you,” repeats the frantic guard.
“Yes, that’s me.”
I've worked it out...but it seemed a little awkward to me at first. I really
look forward to the rest of the story.
--
Thomas Main
main@appstate.edu
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