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Subject:	Re: Chapter 1 of "The chronicles of Scar"
Newsgroups:	lugnet.castle.org.cw
Date:	Mon, 15 May 2000 01:19:22 GMT
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Wonderful Job, Shiri! I really enjoy how much personality your characters have. I like the camera angles used for the pictures of the sentry guard chasing URU (the creature). The story was great, nice job of introducing some of your characters, while also making a reader (viewer?) curious about your storyline. -L

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		Chapter 1 of "The chronicles of Scar"
Hi! Chapter 1 is up, see it here: (URL) bit background info... (please read the chapter before reading this!) : : : : : : : : (I hope you've read the chapter already! this is a spoiler!) : : : : : : : : This chapter started out more than 3 months (...) (24 years ago, 14-May-00, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.announce, lugnet.castle.org.cw) !!

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