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Re: NINJADA: The Plot Thickens...
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Wed, 21 Jun 2000 04:29:56 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, John Robert Blaze Kanehl writes:
> Let me know what you think of the story...I may add or delete text as needed
> to make the story more entertaining. I will correct typos...it's 9 am and I
> have been working on this since 2 am...time to go to sleep.
Wow!!!
I took some time to read it intently, that story is bee-utiful! I love it. The
fact that it is now told by a specific person (can't remember if it was
earlier) and all those little details.... great story!
Reading this, I can't help but re-suggest that we finally enter stories into
the CW database. There are a few now, including Pawel's Chp. 1 ("Of
Katherine"), my chp. 1, now "Ninjada: the epic", James Howse's "Erik Leaves
Home", and probably more that I'm forgetting (I apologize in advance). And I
know there are people working hard on their first chapters ATM (OK, so I know
one person is. ;-). I'm also hard at work for my second.
Sooooo...... do we add stories? What should be the format?
-Shiri
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| (...) Thank you! I took what you and a few RTL lurkers from overseas said to heart... in my enthusiasm to post something, I didn't make the narrative aspects clear. Basically I had to change alot of verb tenses and add some quotation marks along (...) (24 years ago, 21-Jun-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) Hrmph. I knew I was forgetting something. Wilson also had his story about Locke, I recall... Wilson, do we have your approval to use it? Also, Chris (M.) will probably take over the updating while I'm gone; and when I come back, well, (...) (24 years ago, 21-Jun-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| Updated story: (URL) have added more text to the pictures on my webpage. No new pictures yet...unless you missed the past couple updates... The order of pictures has been reset: (by request) -the epic (CW story, fig designs, etc) -cat pics -external (...) (24 years ago, 20-Jun-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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