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The Invasion of Strombrachter Page
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lugnet.castle
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Mon, 27 Dec 1999 16:38:36 GMT
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Hey
A while back I put up some pictures of the city-castle Strombrachter ... here is
the follow up to it (more of a story I suppose):
Here it is:
http://members.xoom.com/verneer/invasion.html
Some background can be found here:
http://members.xoom.com/verneer
Let me know what you think (flames, suggestions, words of encouragament). This
is the second page in a series of six about the Kingdom of Bruce. I plan to use
the remainder of my school break to finish up the 3rd chapter.
Also - please help me with the layout - does it take too long to load? Should I
break it up?
Thanks for looking!
-- pn
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Message has 5 Replies:
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| I'm just getting into this, it looks really neat! (a lot like something I want to do in the future) Format-wise, maybe the text should be beside the picture instead of underneath. I can't read it and look at the picture at the same time, which is a (...) (24 years ago, 27-Dec-99, to lugnet.castle)
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| My previous note about the text and picture arrangement only applies to the big pictures (i.e. the first one) ... the rest is quite easy to read. Again, very neat! -- Paul Davidson Pawel Nazarewicz <verneer@utk.edu> wrote in message (...) (24 years ago, 27-Dec-99, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) pawel ~ ~! what great characters! i love the elementals! your scenes are wonderfully put together and the tree in the forest of illusions is amazing!! (what is it made of that looks like brown steep slopes, btw?) it took a while to load, but (...) (24 years ago, 28-Dec-99, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) Wow! That is an awesome page! I'm hoping to get a digital camera or a nice scanner simply so that I can do something like it. :) I don't have any comments about the layout, though I do agree with the suggestion that you place the text at the (...) (24 years ago, 28-Dec-99, to lugnet.castle)
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