 | | Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —Leonard Hoffman
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| | | despite some minor typos here and there.. here it is: (URL) the recent additions of the The Rising 2nd Half (parts 4,5,6) and the epilogue The Khan. thoughts are welcome, but ignorance is not. -lenny (22 years ago, 16-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.announce.moc, lugnet.general, lugnet.build)
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| | | | | Re: Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —Anthony Sava
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| | | | | (...) Since I'm on a dialup and yours is a fully picture based story, I haven't taken the time or bandwidth to read your story until today. I sat down and read the whole thing, and I gotta say it was pretty darn good. Your MOCs were great, and your (...) (22 years ago, 17-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | | | Re: Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —Leonard Hoffman
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| | | | | | Anthony, Thank you very much for your comments. Coming from you they are a real compliment. Yes, there will be more.. many more. Currently I'm working on a Star Wars funny spoof thing, but I'm getting ideas for more castle stories! Since the failure (...) (22 years ago, 17-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | Re: Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —William Movish
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| | | | | Lenny, I finally got to finish reading the Beyhadur Epic. It was marvellously done! There was an excellent tone to the writing; it really captured the feel of an ancient historical/religious text. I also have to say I really liked the battle (...) (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | Re: Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —William Movish
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| | | | | Lenny, I finally got to finish reading the Beyhadur Epic. It was marvellously done! There was an excellent tone to the writing; it really captured the feel of an ancient historical/religious text. I also have to say I really liked the battle (...) (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | | | Re: Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —Leonard Hoffman
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| | | | | | (...) thanks! (...) Yeah, I realized that while making the first part.. but couldn't immeadiately figured out a solution without having to re-write the whole thing. My next project will eliminate the problem. Thanks for the feedback! _lenny (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | Re: Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —John P. Henderson
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| | | | (...) more of this kind of storytelling. One question, did you work out a storyboard including exactly which MOCs you would need before building, or did you build first and then design the story around your MOCs? Does anyone else with experience of (...) (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | | Re: Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —Nick Oranzi
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| | | | | (...) With my experience with Sirob, I am doing a little bit of both. I made the Characters first and created some MOCs that they would need like houses or inns. This led to story ideas which give ideas for MOCs. -Nick Land of Sirob (URL) (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | | Re: Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —Leonard Hoffman
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| | | | | (...) Thanks Hendo! It was tons of fun to do, and I'm in the process of writing my next one. (...) story first, and then the MOCs. I wrote a 'script' where I designated how many pictures I'd have, and exactly how they would break up with the (...) (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| | | | | | Re: Epic of the Beyhadur: Completion —Anthony Sava
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| | | | (...) If I may add my two cents to this as of yet small discussion. I find with myself it's mainly that I come up with the characters first, then story, then MOCs. However, I must say that I find I have the best luck if I come up with just the raw (...) (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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