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despite some minor typos here and there.. here it is:
http://www.lugnet.com/~1168/beyhadur/
Featuring the recent additions of the The Rising 2nd Half (parts 4,5,6) and
the epilogue The Khan.
thoughts are welcome, but ignorance is not.
-lenny
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| (...) Since I'm on a dialup and yours is a fully picture based story, I haven't taken the time or bandwidth to read your story until today. I sat down and read the whole thing, and I gotta say it was pretty darn good. Your MOCs were great, and your (...) (22 years ago, 17-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| Lenny, I finally got to finish reading the Beyhadur Epic. It was marvellously done! There was an excellent tone to the writing; it really captured the feel of an ancient historical/religious text. I also have to say I really liked the battle (...) (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| Lenny, I finally got to finish reading the Beyhadur Epic. It was marvellously done! There was an excellent tone to the writing; it really captured the feel of an ancient historical/religious text. I also have to say I really liked the battle (...) (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) more of this kind of storytelling. One question, did you work out a storyboard including exactly which MOCs you would need before building, or did you build first and then design the story around your MOCs? Does anyone else with experience of (...) (22 years ago, 20-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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