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Re: Erik leaves home
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Sun, 13 Feb 2000 18:01:19 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, James Howse writes:
> Caution fiction following....
Great!
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> Eirk Leaves Home.
c/eirk/erik
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<great story snipped>
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> A small start to The Saga of Erik and an first essay at fiction writing.
> Please LMKWYT, thanks
It's great! I love how you managed, in less than a page of writing, to
determine who Erik was, where he was, what he wanted and what is he doing to
get it. Being an amatuer actor, I know that these are the most important
things to do in ANY scene. Without describing the person, just telling his
feelings, you gave us enough background so that we can understand what will
come next. And you did it in a really interesting way, too!
Great Job! Waiting for more!
-Shiri
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| Caution fiction following.... Eirk Leaves Home. Erik hefted his pack into the small boat. Feeling the wind snap around him he turned back to look at the small town and the tower beyond. Now that it was time to go he was not sure he wanted to. It was (...) (24 years ago, 13-Feb-00, to lugnet.castle)
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