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Re: Lego Superhero Comic Book
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lugnet.town
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Thu, 27 Mar 2003 04:39:08 GMT
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In lugnet.town, Tim Courtney writes:
> In lugnet.town, Jesse Alan Long writes:
> > In lugnet.announce.moc, Jason Gross writes:
> > > Hello everyone,
> > >
> > > I am very excited to make my first posting here on Lugnet. My friend Bryan
> > > and I have completed the first issue of our online Lego-based superhero
> > > comic book. You can find it at:
> > >
> > > www.appleisp.net/~jgross
> > >
> > > Please check it out and let us know what you think! Issue #2 is already in
> > > the works.
> > >
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > > -Jason
> > >
> > > P.S. I hope I got the newsgroups right. I'm not sure if lugnet.town is the
> > > best place for follow-ups.
> >
> > Well, Brian, and company, I must say that I am quite impressed with what you
> > have done. Is this the very first time that you have ever done this at all?
> > Well, for the most part, it was well done, but I found some problem areas in
> > the series, some grammatical errors as well as better suggestions for how
> > scenes will work out. Here is my list:
>
> So um, excuse me, but where do you get off telling him what he should and
> shouldn't do with *his* comic strip?
>
> -Tim
Tim,
I think what Jesse was trying to say over his 40-some lines of suggestions
(that just as easily could have been summed up in 2 lines)
was that he wishes the story would have been presented with "G" or "PG" rated
exclamations vs the "PG-13" rated language that Jason and Bryan chose to use.
I personally like that it was written for the teen to adult audience.
That said...
Wow, Jason and Bryan!
Great job, it's obvious you both put a lot of effort into this. I for one have
nominated you for consideration as CLSOTW and look forward to Issue #2.
You may already have seen this but a great resource for online comics creators
is "Reinventing Comics" by Scott McCloud.
http://www.scottmccloud.com/store/books/rc.html
and the rest of his website lists links to some interesting online comics.
Also, thanks for turning me on to the fantastic free typefaces at
http://www.blambot.com
You've got me itching to try my hand at a LEGO-based comic...
--
Bill
(TooMuchDew)
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