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Re: Lego Superhero Comic Book
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lugnet.town
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Wed, 26 Mar 2003 18:32:55 GMT
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In lugnet.town, Jesse Alan Long writes:
> In lugnet.announce.moc, Jason Gross writes:
> > Hello everyone,
> >
> > I am very excited to make my first posting here on Lugnet. My friend Bryan
> > and I have completed the first issue of our online Lego-based superhero
> > comic book. You can find it at:
> >
> > www.appleisp.net/~jgross
> >
> > Please check it out and let us know what you think! Issue #2 is already in
> > the works.
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> >
> > Thanks,
> > -Jason
> >
> > P.S. I hope I got the newsgroups right. I'm not sure if lugnet.town is the
> > best place for follow-ups.
>
> Well, Brian, and company, I must say that I am quite impressed with what you
> have done. Is this the very first time that you have ever done this at all?
> Well, for the most part, it was well done, but I found some problem areas in
> the series, some grammatical errors as well as better suggestions for how
> scenes will work out. Here is my list:
So um, excuse me, but where do you get off telling him what he should and
shouldn't do with *his* comic strip?
-Tim
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| (...) Tim, I think what Jesse was trying to say over his 40-some lines of suggestions (that just as easily could have been summed up in 2 lines) was that he wishes the story would have been presented with "G" or "PG" rated exclamations vs the (...) (21 years ago, 27-Mar-03, to lugnet.town)
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| (...) Well, Brian, and company, I must say that I am quite impressed with what you have done. Is this the very first time that you have ever done this at all? Well, for the most part, it was well done, but I found some problem areas in the series, (...) (21 years ago, 26-Mar-03, to lugnet.town)
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