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(...) My apologies with the rather tenuous response. My family gave me a little ten minute ultimatum on the computer, so I was pressed to write the reply rather hastily. :) (...) Nah, conventional fantasy is *way* too repeated. Maybe I should (...) (22 years ago, 24-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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In lugnet.publish, Matt Hein writes: <lots of good back and forth> I can't stay too long tonite, I got a mountain calling my name but I will just leave you with this one clarification _Wild Seed_ *is* a fantasy. It may not be the conventional swords (...) (22 years ago, 24-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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(...) I'm going to fix the dialogue first, then work on the rest of the specifics. (...) Avoid it all costs so the reader can figure it out, then. Noted. (...) Ah, this sounds pretty fun, actually. Why make an enemy obvious when in fact, they would (...) (22 years ago, 24-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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(...) Great. Now, a note... The samples I picked were just that, samples. I chose a few to illustrate a point, not that if you fix these you're all set. They're characteristic of much of the work that I read. (...) You're often better off not (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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(...) Boy, you and Sanburn are really zany for posting-group purity! 8^) I moved my part of the thread to ot.geek because I shifted into a particular discussion of authors, rather than the niceties of writing. But if you think it's better steered to (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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(...) Very well. (...) Okay, I'm working on that and a small index. (...) Hmm...you've got a point there. Perhaps I was trying to convey that he was rather evasive (?) Evasive to reveal his opinion? (...) Hmm...okay, the clouds were almost shaped (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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(...) True, but we are talking about storycraft, not castle construction. On reflection, publish is the right place I think. (and not o-t.geek either) (...) Yes I have. I have not read all of it but I think much of what others said applies. I found (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general, lugnet.publish)
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(...) The desired focus by far would probably be event driven. (with a small amount of character thrown in as well.) (...) Okay, I haven't really gone into explanation of those, (technology) although there would be some minor inclusions when it (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general, lugnet.publish)
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(...) Ursula Le Guin has identified the "multiple foci" perspective as the hardest to execute effectively. I'm not sure I agree 100%, but it's definitely tricky to write character sufficiently distinct from one another to allow the reader to believe (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general, lugnet.publish)
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(...) What is the desired focus? That something is set in a particular time period does not in and of itself make it milleau... if the characters are what drive the story, it's still character. It's not a forcing per se I don't feel, but a way to (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general, lugnet.publish)
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And now everything is down again. :( -JHK (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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(...) Well, I've got quite a nice list of books to peruse for christmas vacation. (not a bad collection, as that :) However, what if you were trying to fuse story types? For example, let's say you're writing the book in a historic stance, yet it's (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general, lugnet.publish)
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In lugnet.castle, Leonard Hoffman writes: Great post! (snipped it, but it's worth rereading...) I know some people don't like Orson Scott Card, and some do. But this book of his _How to Write Science Fiction & Fantasy_ is chock full of good advice. (...) (22 years ago, 23-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general, lugnet.publish)
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I got an email from Ozbricks saying that somebody had maxed out the bandwith on their server, and that they would impose a 10 Gigabyte limit on bandwith, which could be raised in case of a popular site, but of which the only purpose was to prevent a (...) (22 years ago, 22-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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John, It shut down my Visual Helper site, too. (2 URLs) address used to be a redirect to the .com site. But it's blocked with the same message. The websites linked to on the front hosting page of ozbricks.com are still working, but they have a .com (...) (22 years ago, 21-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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Everything at www.ozbricks.net is down, including my website. www.ozbricks.net/kru...h/home.htm However, everything at www.ozbricks.com is fine. Maybe the .net's server is down? Does anybody know what's happening? -JHK (22 years ago, 21-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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I don't know about a video camera, but for a still camera you should look for: Resolution (megapixels)- you can crop small stuff out of large pictures that you couldn't do otherwise with smaller sizes, and get more detail Zoom: Might not be (...) (22 years ago, 21-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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(...) Opps sorry about that. Those links have been fixed. One had a type (no one left to speak) and the other was linking somehere else. =) Here is a quicker link to them: (URL) this way you miss the rest of the website. =( (...) There are 6 in the (...) (22 years ago, 20-Dec-02, to lugnet.starwars, lugnet.general, lugnet.publish)
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Hello I havn't posted here befor but I wanted to know what type of things I should look for on a camera (I'm looking for both still and video info; not necessarily together.) Also I would like to also know what type of editing software you would (...) (22 years ago, 20-Dec-02, to lugnet.publish)
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(...) Yes, Brickshelf is crusin'. Read Kevin's reponse here: (URL) (22 years ago, 19-Dec-02, to lugnet.general, lugnet.publish)
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