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Re: Land Ho, An Isle of Mist story
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Wed, 14 Nov 2001 16:42:32 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Cale Leiphart writes:
> This is just a teeny, tiny, not so much that anyone would notice bit late,
> but I finally got around to Writing a story about my character's arrival on
> the Isle of mist. http://www.lugnet.com/~271/IsleofMist/Chaptrer1 I'm not a
> practiced story teller so any feedback would be appreciated.
I like your story, and I like the set-up of your page right now - the
pictures are vivid, and it is evident that a lot of work went into putting
in the details of the ship - kudos on the extra effort.
You also have a good mix of characters and personalities - leaves the
possibilities of what wil happen nice and open.
-- Pawel
http://www.geocities.com/cw_isleofmist/
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| When I click on Cale's link below, I don't see any pictures at all, except the title across the top. Am I missing something? -Andy Lynch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Pawel Nazarewicz" <verneer@utk.edu> (...) bit late, (...) arrival on (...) (...) (23 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| | Land Ho, An Isle of Mist story
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| This is just a teeny, tiny, not so much that anyone would notice bit late, but I finally got around to Writing a story about my character's arrival on the Isle of mist. (URL) I'm not a practiced story teller so any feedback would be appreciated. I (...) (23 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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