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Re: Land Ho, An Isle of Mist story
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Wed, 14 Nov 2001 14:38:32 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Cale Leiphart writes:
> This is just a teeny, tiny, not so much that anyone would notice bit late,
> but I finally got around to Writing a story about my character's arrival on
> the Isle of mist. http://www.lugnet.com/~271/IsleofMist/Chaptrer1 I'm not a
> practiced story teller so any feedback would be appreciated.
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> I also wrote some profiles for my characters, and a description of their
> airship. http://www.lugnet.com/~271/IsleofMist/ Hope you enjoy.
Nice! Very, very nice! I enjoyed reading it immensely.
Everybody is giving you advice, so I guess I will too... Mine would be: just
run it through Microsoft Word. That's what I do with my stories, and they
rarely have any errors now. :)
--
Mark Nelson
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