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Re: FINALLY! I started on my story!
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lugnet.castle
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Tue, 11 Mar 2003 11:18:03 GMT
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I used a webcam to take the pix, its the only thing I had at the moment
I'm not sure if I'll get any better quality pix, because my digital cam eats
thru batteries, and the stupid wall adapter is broken on it, so if I dont
use the webcam I'm SOL.....
P.S. I hope to have the next part up by tomorrow night
laterz
Joey
> In lugnet.castle, Nick Oranzi writes:
> The story seems intriguing, mysterious. The characters and the dialog seem
> natural and the events ask many questions which i assume will be answered in
> time. Your cut off leaves me interested, not quite the whole event so you
> better finish the next part soon.
>
> AS far as tense, past or present doesn't really matter as long as it remains
> consistent (except of course in dialog or flashback. I think that the tense
> is best represented in the intended attitude. Past is obviously something
> that already happened, as if someone is telling the story. Present gives a
> more immediate feeling as if it is not a story but a narration of what is
> happening. So which ever feeling suits your story then it is good, just
> make sure it remains the same throughout otherwise it becomes confusing.
>
> Writing aside, the pictures seemed very grainy though, I guess you aren't
> using the most fantastic camera but my experiences have taught me few tricks
> to compensate (i have some cheap $60 digital camera). First, experiment
> with different programs, i found that different software gives me higher
> quality. Use natural daylight for good color balance, and try taking the
> picture from further away and using photoshop to enlarge it with minimal
> quality loss.
>
> I really enjoyed your story though, pictures abound and plot is interesting.
> I can't wait to see you use your neat custom figs too!
>
> -Nick
> http://mywebpages.comcast.net/oranzinr
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