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Re: FINALLY! I started on my story!
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lugnet.castle
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Tue, 11 Mar 2003 11:11:01 GMT
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As I said in the post to Alex I'm not the best writer, I need to work on
that part for sure, I appriciate the advice. Thanx
P.S. The next part is coming soon.
Laterz
> In lugnet.castle, Adrian Drake writes:
> > In lugnet.castle, Joey Finnell writes:
> > > Hi all,
> > >
> > > I finally got off my butt, and got something finished, ok well I know it
> > > needs more writing but hey at least I got something done :-P so here it is,
> > > I'm on
> > > a roll, more soon to come
> > >
> > > http://www.angelfire.com/wizard/of_the_ages/Story.html
> > >
> > > just click quest
> > >
> > > and by all means, LMKWYT
> > >
> > > laterz
> > >
> > > Joey
>
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> Most fiction is written in past tense, yes. Though choosing between one and
> the other is a personal choice. However, you should stick to one of them. I
> noticed your story switches from past tense to present half way through, and
> then switches back to past at the end, which is a little odd. Was that
> purposeful?
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> I wouldn't say that writing in past tense is "better", per se, but it is much
> more common, and as such, our brains are usually tuned to interpret present
> tense as weird.
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> Keep creating, you're off to a fine start.
>
> Adrian
> --
> http://www.brickfrenzy.com
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| (...) Most fiction is written in past tense, yes. Though choosing between one and the other is a personal choice. However, you should stick to one of them. I noticed your story switches from past tense to present half way through, and then switches (...) (24 years ago, 10-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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