To LUGNET HomepageTo LUGNET News HomepageTo LUGNET Guide Homepage
 Help on Searching
 
Post new message to lugnet.castle.org.cwOpen lugnet.castle.org.cw in your NNTP NewsreaderTo LUGNET News Traffic PageSign In (Members)
 Castle / Castle Organizations / Castle World / 1240
1239  |  1241
Subject: 
Re: Journey to the Isle of Mist
Newsgroups: 
lugnet.castle.org.cw
Date: 
Wed, 7 Nov 2001 01:18:31 GMT
Viewed: 
558 times
  
In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Shiri Dori writes:
Hi Wilson, Fritz, and the rest,

Wow - wow! When I finished the story I actually let out a "woohoo" out loud!
My roommate is already asking me to get offline coz I'm tying up the phone -
I've been online or a long time reading this - but let me say, wow, wow,
wow. So many different characters and collaborations! Such a great story,
and of course, dare I say, the best graphics in Castle World, perhaps all of
lugnet! I am amazed, dazed, and I love it all.

Wow Shiri, thanks for the compliments!  Now as I said in reply to Nathan's
post, I don't know if I'm the best in CW, but I have been editing my castle
pics for about a year now, and I can say that I think I have been improving
my skills.  I'm also really happy to see many more people editing their
castle pics and I'm still amazed by the work of other balladeers and it
makes me say "Wow, how did they do *that*?"

I really like how you two tied your stories in retrospect, and I was LOL
during a few parts of the story! Now tell me, is Kaiser lost under the
boxes, and is he named after Germany's Kaiser?...

Kaiser is tied up below decks for the journey.  We wouldn't want him running
around on the deck and possibly falling off, now would we?  As far as the
inspiration for his name, you'll have to ask Fritz about that one.
Personally, I think it's a pretty awesome name for a dog!

The only constructive criticism I can possibly give is, careful on the
typos! I saw and "and" that became "at" and a few letters missing here and
there. (But of course, that happens to everyone!)

Thanks for this.  I just went through it again and fixed some minor spelling
errors and such.  I should have someone else read through it and proofread
it for me though, since you tend to miss errors when you're reading
something you just wrote yourself.

Wilson
http://home.sofast.net/~raska



Message has 1 Reply:
  Re: Journey to the Isle of Mist
 
(...) You betcha! It happens to me all the time. Hey, if you want someone to proofreda, I'm available! (Then I'll get to see all the stories first, muahahaha! ;-) -Shiri (23 years ago, 7-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)

Message is in Reply To:
  Re: Journey to the Isle of Mist
 
Hi Wilson, Fritz, and the rest, Wow - wow! When I finished the story I actually let out a "woohoo" out loud! My roommate is already asking me to get offline coz I'm tying up the phone - I've been online or a long time reading this - but let me say, (...) (23 years ago, 6-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)

15 Messages in This Thread:








Entire Thread on One Page:
Nested:  All | Brief | Compact | Dots
Linear:  All | Brief | Compact

This Message and its Replies on One Page:
Nested:  All | Brief | Compact | Dots
Linear:  All | Brief | Compact
    

Custom Search

©2005 LUGNET. All rights reserved. - hosted by steinbruch.info GbR