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(...) Nice! Very, very nice! I enjoyed reading it immensely. Everybody is giving you advice, so I guess I will too... Mine would be: just run it through Microsoft Word. That's what I do with my stories, and they rarely have any errors now. :) -- (...) (23 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Hi Cale!! The story gives a good introduction to the main characters. Good job! I like the little exposition about Joshua and Catherine's past, and yet you manage to keep Catherine seem a bit secretive. An air of mystery around her motives. I (...) (23 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Sounds good so far! I do have a few suggestions, though. ;) First, the last paragraph is way too long. It really needs to be broken up a bit. Also, you may want to print out some hard copies and get people to make corrections. That should help (...) (23 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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This is just a teeny, tiny, not so much that anyone would notice bit late, but I finally got around to Writing a story about my character's arrival on the Isle of mist. (URL) I'm not a practiced story teller so any feedback would be appreciated. I (...) (23 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Well, I like the stories more than anything, so it doesn't matter to me too much if it doesn't have pictures. :) If you want to go back and take pictures later, go for it. :) Jeff (23 years ago, 14-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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<posted to lugnet.castle.org.cw> (...) Cool! The first permanent structure (not to say that a cabin isn't permanent, but stone is always more stable :) (...) First of all, I see that (URL) is finally back up. I really like your site, and I look (...) (23 years ago, 13-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Personally, since we are all lego-centered, while stories might be fun to read, I am personally interested in legos more so than anything. That's why I hang out here ;) As far as RT - I would say to not worry about it too much. While it's cool (...) (23 years ago, 13-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) if i ever have my pics developed and join im going to send my barbarians there in an air ship and boat. i just hope its still really unexplored then. david gardner (23 years ago, 13-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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I was just wondering what the general opinion of stories without model pictures was? I'm finding myself coming up with great story ideas, but not having the time (due to my job right now) to build the models to go with them. As it is I'm 4 days (...) (23 years ago, 13-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) took (...) Propellors on top of the masts. :) It'll also have an engine powered by a stone that's density is altered by subjecting it to heat and cold. :) Jeff (23 years ago, 13-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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