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Re: Forest of Blood Chapter 3
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lugnet.castle
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Wed, 28 Mar 2001 15:05:42 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Shiri Dori writes:
> In lugnet.castle, Joel Jacobsen writes:
> > Well, after a much longer than desired lull in working on my web site due to
> > an ailing computer, I've finished up the last of the three parts presently
> > in the Forest of Blood.
> >
> > http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Castle/Fob-main.htm
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> Wow Joel! Good job! I was hoping maybe they'd manage to resist, but that's
> coz I'm a sucker for happy endings, and anyway, resistance is futile, right? ;-)
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> The ending was really good, and a cliffhanger of a different sort that
> you''ve shown us so far (if that makes sense). I think what made me
> assume/hope that they would win is the fact that you portrayed them as
> really likeable characters, (which is good,) so killing them off (or
> undead-ing them? Uhhhh...) was not so much expected! Or maybe I should've
> seen it coming, expect the unexpected, or something like that? I follow that
> rule when I write my story.
Ah... but to borrow a quote from "The Mummy" -- Death is only the beginning...
These three chapters were written for two reasons - to introduce these four
characters, and to serve as the preface to the 'real' stories to come.
Admittedly there isn't a "lot" of meat to the chapters, but there are some
important tidbits about the lands within them if one looks. ;)
> -Shiri (who really wants a happy ending for her story, but is contemplating
> after a friend told her not to sacrifice the plot for the ending! ouch!)
My wife is annoyed with me because of the ending, too. ;)
Don't get me wrong. I LOVE happy endings (that's why Gladiator went from
being an 'awesome' movie for me about 2/3rds of the way through to being an
'ok' movie with awesome graphics work when it ended.).
There isn't much that I can say other than - we'll all have to see how
things turn out when all of the cards have been dealt and the last hand has
been played. ;)
Joel J
http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Main/lego%20creations.htm
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| (...) coz I'm a sucker for happy endings, and anyway, resistance is futile, right? ;-) The ending was really good, and a cliffhanger of a different sort that you''ve shown us so far (if that makes sense). I think what made me assume/hope that they (...) (24 years ago, 28-Mar-01, to lugnet.castle)
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