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Forest of Blood Chapter 3
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Tue, 27 Mar 2001 03:26:53 GMT
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Well, after a much longer than desired lull in working on my web site due to
an ailing computer, I've finished up the last of the three parts presently
in the Forest of Blood.
http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Castle/Fob-main.htm
I've changed the first two chapters so that they link to the following
chapters - no more going back to the main menu. :)
I intend to go over the story again in the near future and try to rewrite
it, taking into consideration some great feedback that Anthony Sava gave me
not long ago.
Comments and questions welcome. :)
Joel J
http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Main/lego%20creations.htm
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Message has 7 Replies:
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| (...) out there. But this can't be the end of the three parts, you've only just begun! :) MORE! MORE! I tip my hat to you. --Anthony (URL) (23 years ago, 27-Mar-01, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) Well done. Great last shot - very effective and well spliced. I LOVE that armor :) You should get Elin's ax for that guy - it would fit him. (URL) ... I love that ax :) -- Pawel (23 years ago, 27-Mar-01, to lugnet.castle)
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| Joel, Engaging storyline so far... :-) Can't wait to find out more, but please, avoid the spoilers! IMO Teasers are great, but leave us guessing and wanting more! Your photo editing skills are really great too... -Andy Lynch ----- Original Message (...) (23 years ago, 27-Mar-01, to lugnet.castle)
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| Hey Joel, nice job on the third installment of your great storyline! I do agree with Pawel about that last shot, it's a great ending and a great beginning at the same time. When Beliwyr says, "And so it begins," it opens up your storyline and tells (...) (23 years ago, 27-Mar-01, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) coz I'm a sucker for happy endings, and anyway, resistance is futile, right? ;-) The ending was really good, and a cliffhanger of a different sort that you''ve shown us so far (if that makes sense). I think what made me assume/hope that they (...) (23 years ago, 28-Mar-01, to lugnet.castle)
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