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Re: Forest of Blood Chapter 3
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lugnet.castle
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Wed, 28 Mar 2001 10:00:46 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Joel Jacobsen writes:
> Well, after a much longer than desired lull in working on my web site due to
> an ailing computer, I've finished up the last of the three parts presently
> in the Forest of Blood.
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> http://home.columbus.rr.com/jacobsen/html/Castle/Fob-main.htm
Wow Joel! Good job! I was hoping maybe they'd manage to resist, but that's
coz I'm a sucker for happy endings, and anyway, resistance is futile, right? ;-)
The ending was really good, and a cliffhanger of a different sort that
you''ve shown us so far (if that makes sense). I think what made me
assume/hope that they would win is the fact that you portrayed them as
really likeable characters, (which is good,) so killing them off (or
undead-ing them? Uhhhh...) was not so much expected! Or maybe I should've
seen it coming, expect the unexpected, or something like that? I follow that
rule when I write my story.
-Shiri (who really wants a happy ending for her story, but is contemplating
after a friend told her not to sacrifice the plot for the ending! ouch!)
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| (...) Ah... but to borrow a quote from "The Mummy" -- Death is only the beginning... These three chapters were written for two reasons - to introduce these four characters, and to serve as the preface to the 'real' stories to come. Admittedly there (...) (23 years ago, 28-Mar-01, to lugnet.castle)
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| Well, after a much longer than desired lull in working on my web site due to an ailing computer, I've finished up the last of the three parts presently in the Forest of Blood. (URL) changed the first two chapters so that they link to the following (...) (23 years ago, 27-Mar-01, to lugnet.castle) !!
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