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Re: Kingdom of Gatimrja: story continues
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lugnet.castle
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Fri, 21 Jun 2002 05:43:59 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, William Movish writes:
> Chapter I of my castle story is finished.
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> Check it out at: http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
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> You can get there from the Updates section, or the brand new (and rather
> empty) Stories page.
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> Stay tuned for Chapter II, which is currently in production.
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> And, as always, comments are greatly appreciated.
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> --William
I thought chapter 1 was very well written....lots of (political) intrigue at
the very beginning with the southern power-hungry duke.
Very nice touch to have a female as the hero(ine) of the saga. I noticed that
a lot of the females in your "kingdom" have high, powerful spots. I am
not trying to sound "sexist" but I just thought it was very modern and
innovative.
I liked the part at the end with Prince Harold....very nice at the end.
Very regal, but also very young and impetuous. I can't wait to see some of
the exploits and trouble the young prince will get the other members of the
party into..... :)
Benjamin Medinets
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| Chapter I of my castle story is finished. Check it out at: (URL) can get there from the Updates section, or the brand new (and rather empty) Stories page. Stay tuned for Chapter II, which is currently in production. And, as always, comments are (...) (23 years ago, 21-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.announce)
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