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Chapter I of my castle story is finished.
Check it out at: http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
You can get there from the Updates section, or the brand new (and rather
empty) Stories page.
Stay tuned for Chapter II, which is currently in production.
And, as always, comments are greatly appreciated.
--William
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| (...) Well, I got a chance to read your story, and I must say it's quite interesting. Lots of picture detail, and of course, a decent beginning for a medieval story. The dialogue settings are very odd, though... I've never seen them done in that (...) (22 years ago, 21-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) Well done. The dialogue, I thought, was cleverly written and the action matched up well. I liked the facial portrates identifying the different speakers also. Keep up the good work. --Anthony (URL) (22 years ago, 21-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| I hadn't read any of your stories (eg, the prologue) yet. what a really cool premise! and funny too! a cursing princess of has been asleep for 1000 yrs! how funny! This is some really good stuff, and alot of gutsy risks (a yellow, white, red, blue (...) (22 years ago, 21-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) I thought chapter 1 was very well written....lots of (political) intrigue at the very beginning with the southern power-hungry duke. Very nice touch to have a female as the hero(ine) of the saga. I noticed that a lot of the females in your (...) (22 years ago, 21-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| Thanks, everyone, for the feedback. The constructive criticism is rellay what I was hoping for. To that end, i spent a bit of time yesterday increasing the size of the character icons which identify who's speaking. Hopefully they are easier to see (...) (22 years ago, 22-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle)
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