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Re: Kingdom of Gatimrja: story continues
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Fri, 21 Jun 2002 03:09:14 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, William Movish writes:
> Chapter I of my castle story is finished.
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> Check it out at: http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
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> You can get there from the Updates section, or the brand new (and rather
> empty) Stories page.
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> Stay tuned for Chapter II, which is currently in production.
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> And, as always, comments are greatly appreciated.
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> --William
Well done. The dialogue, I thought, was cleverly written and the action
matched up well. I liked the facial portrates identifying the different
speakers also.
Keep up the good work.
--Anthony
http://www.ozbricks.com/ikros
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| (...) I agree, except that the thumbnail portraits were a bit too small to readily distinguish the speaker, especially when he was wearing a helmet. . . I also thought that helmet inconspicuously leaping off a head at Aemilia's language was neat (...) (22 years ago, 21-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| Chapter I of my castle story is finished. Check it out at: (URL) can get there from the Updates section, or the brand new (and rather empty) Stories page. Stay tuned for Chapter II, which is currently in production. And, as always, comments are (...) (22 years ago, 21-Jun-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.announce)
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