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Hey guys and gals, Well, it took me a while, but I finally finished my new site. It's alot cleaner and more streamlined than my last sites, and IMHO I think it came out pretty darn good. Check it out! (URL) the way, to commemorate this site, I also (...) (23 years ago, 16-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle) !!
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(...) attitude from it (naturally with strong references made to Genesis, etc). Very intriguing, and the writing style fits perfectly. As far as your edits - I think that for what you are trying to do, they are very well done. The ratio of text to (...) (23 years ago, 17-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) I'd like to echo Pawel's reply, this is definately some of your best work to date. The pictures are very impressive, and the story is well written. I look forward to seeing the site expand. --Anthony (23 years ago, 17-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) I drew alot of inspiration from the book of Genesis and J.R.R. Tolkein's The Silmarillion when first writing these 'creation' shapters. I think the entire idea of, as well as the introduction to a world alive with so much history and mythology (...) (23 years ago, 17-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) Thanx Anthony! I'd almost lost the reason why I even attempt all this "Velaria" stuff, and then I took a long hard look at everyone else's stuff in .Castle. I realized that it's all about what any one of us can contribute to the others, be it (...) (23 years ago, 17-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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Very nice work. One question, if you don't mind...How did you do the mullion detail in your Hidden Fortress? I don't recognize these as any Lego parts I've ever seen, but they look extremely professional. (23 years ago, 17-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) Thanx for the kind words Alex! The windows of the Hidden fortress are crafted by the Dwarves themselves, so divulging information on their hand-craft is against the craftsmen's code. LOL. But seriously, in the Lord of the Rings set "The (...) (23 years ago, 17-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) If only... (23 years ago, 17-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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a great first chapter and new site! amazingly well done! I really enjoyed your style of writing, and the ratio of words-to-pictures. i eagerly await more! -lenny (...) (23 years ago, 18-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) Thanx alot Lenny! I put alot of work into it, so I'm glad you liked it! Plenty more is on the way! -Jay (URL) (23 years ago, 18-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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Jason, As I said when you previously posted the story, I really like the whole creation feel of it ((URL) And the pictures you've added really enhance the story. The pictures and story really give the feel of a pantheon of gods that rule your world. (...) (23 years ago, 20-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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(...) It's really rather hard to try and explain how a whole world and it's beliefs come about, and I didn't realize this til I started writing the first chapter. Suddenly everything down to the last minute detail must have been explained, and it (...) (23 years ago, 20-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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