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Re: The Kalashnikov is ready for Battle.
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lugnet.space
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Tue, 8 Jul 2003 20:03:27 GMT
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In lugnet.space, John Henry Kruer wrote:
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In lugnet.space, Leonard Hoffman wrote:
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Comrades,
The Office of the Jr.Marshal is pleased to announce the completion of its
latest and greatest project: The Long-Range Interstellar Strategic Warship,
the Kalashnikov.
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Looking good Lenny! Your best work so far. I like the overall shape, and the
interior is nicely detailed. Oh, and are those modified Outer Rim nacalles I
see? :)
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I was wondering on how to do it, until I saw your nacelles and had a wave of
trekkie nostalgia. they are inspired by outer rim nacelles, but structurally
pretty different. a mix between your idea and paul hartzog’s cool engine
thingie idea.
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Very nice work, though allow me to make a few suggestions.
1. The overall look of it is great, but it looks a little too flat. Some
sort of gradual sloping up or large dish or something will help make the the
top not look as flat. The ridge at the front is a good example of this.
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i didn’t really get an idea of how flat it was until i took pictures from the
side. now i can’t help but notice it. i dunno if i’ll change this.. definately
not right now. need a break from this project. maybe i’ll keep this advice
filed in the “next big project” file.
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2.
The color scheme, while well chosen, is a bit too random. Try too keep the
little solo bits of red pieces down. Basically, think this way:
*Main color
scheme, fill the body up mostly with this one color
*Highlight color: add
highlights like lines or ‘lumps’ in this color.
*Greeblie color- can be any
of the above, or different. Fill in gaps and corners with greeblies of this
color.
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yeah yeah yeah. color, schmolor. think random coloring = technological
craziness of a soviet style building scheme. they kinda threw things together,
usually with somewhat dangerous results for the crew. i see the kal in that
line.
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I think these tips will help make the ship look a little more unified.
Keep it up!
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thanks for the comments. criticism is more helpful than anything else, and
while this ship ain’t perfect, i need to know a way to fix it up next time!
-Jr.Marshal Hoffman
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| (...) Looking good Lenny! Your best work so far. I like the overall shape, and the interior is nicely detailed. Oh, and are those modified Outer Rim nacalles I see? :) Very nice work, though allow me to make a few suggestions. 1. The overall look of (...) (21 years ago, 5-Jul-03, to lugnet.space, FTX)
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