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Re: MOC: Pre Classic Jump Lander & an experiment....
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Thu, 13 Feb 2003 20:50:28 GMT
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Gil, you've not only caught the PSC feel perfectly, you've made it your own.
I really, really like this one.
Contrary to Chris' suggestion, I'd leave the rear foot as it is. It makes
for a good tripod look - very NASA Landerish. I agree about the painted dome
though. Do you have a clear version? (the LOM T3 Trike has one - and is a
fine set to boot). Other critisisms? Um... replace the 1x1 tile next to the
window with a matching tap greebly? I really have no idea how to
significantly improve this. You've got the PCS thing pretty much nailed.
BTW, does the landing gear tuck away very neatly? I'd like to see a shot
with the gear up.
My only other suggestion - BUILD MORE :)
Allister
In lugnet.space, Gil Shaw writes:
> Greetings!
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> My first attempt as somthing in the Pre Classic theme....
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> http://home.cogeco.ca/~gtoradoch/Misc/misc_pcsjump.htm
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> Now, for the experiment part.
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> After reading the recent discussions on critiques and their effects and
> value in the forum, I was wondering was I do with constructive criticism
> towards my MOCs. I often receive such critiques, as we all do, and they are
> appreciated in the spirit they are given....but what do I do with them? I
> have I ever gone back and altered a finished model, trying to incorporate
> suggestions that I thought could enhance the design? Have I built
> variations on it afterwards, incorporating the suggestions? Does spaghetti
> really grow on trees?
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> Certainly I can say that I have learned from other builder's suggestions and
> have incorporated them into later,different models, and have asked for
> opinions during construction or planning, producing a better design thanks
> to their input. I don't think however that I've tried to improve a finished
> design.
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> So, this one will be an experiment. As always, all comments are welcome and
> appreciated, but perhaps turn your critical eyes a little more towards this
> one. Once it's been out in the wild for a while and hopefully some notes
> have come back, I'd like to take a look at it again and incoporate some of
> the ideas suggested. As we all know, we build for ourselves and our own
> satisfaction so your critiques may be applicable or might not be depending
> on how they mesh with the model. This is a true community of artists -
> people who inspire, educate and ground one another. I would attribute much
> of my enjoyment and personal satisfaction with the Brick to the silent
> tuteledge of all the builders here. I see this experiment as yet another
> lesson for me...let the class begin!
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> Cheers,
> -Gil
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