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Re: MOC: Pre Classic Jump Lander & an experiment....
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Thu, 13 Feb 2003 20:50:28 GMT
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Gil, you've not only caught the PSC feel perfectly, you've made it your own.
I really, really like this one.

Contrary to Chris' suggestion, I'd leave the rear foot as it is. It makes
for a good tripod look - very NASA Landerish. I agree about the painted dome
though. Do you have a clear version? (the LOM T3 Trike has one - and is a
fine set to boot). Other critisisms? Um... replace the 1x1 tile next to the
window with a matching tap greebly? I really have no idea how to
significantly improve this. You've got the PCS thing pretty much nailed.
BTW, does the landing gear tuck away very neatly? I'd like to see a shot
with the gear up.

My only other suggestion - BUILD MORE :)

Allister

In lugnet.space, Gil Shaw writes:
Greetings!

My first attempt as somthing in the Pre Classic theme....

http://home.cogeco.ca/~gtoradoch/Misc/misc_pcsjump.htm

Now, for the experiment part.

After reading the recent discussions on critiques and their effects and
value in the forum, I was wondering was I do with constructive criticism
towards my MOCs.  I often receive such critiques, as we all do, and they are
appreciated in the spirit they are given....but what do I do with them?  I
have I ever gone back and altered a finished model, trying to incorporate
suggestions that I thought could enhance the design?  Have I built
variations on it afterwards, incorporating the suggestions?  Does spaghetti
really grow on trees?

Certainly I can say that I have learned from other builder's suggestions and
have incorporated them into later,different models, and have asked for
opinions during construction or planning, producing a better design thanks
to their input.  I don't think however that I've tried to improve a finished
design.

So, this one will be an experiment.  As always, all comments are welcome and
appreciated, but perhaps turn your critical eyes a little more towards this
one.  Once it's been out in the wild for a while and hopefully some notes
have come back, I'd like to take a look at it again and incoporate some of
the ideas suggested.  As we all know, we build for ourselves and our own
satisfaction so your critiques may be applicable or might not be depending
on how they mesh with the model.  This is a true community of artists -
people who inspire, educate and ground one another.  I would attribute much
of my enjoyment and personal satisfaction with the Brick to the silent
tuteledge of all the builders here.  I see this experiment as yet another
lesson for me...let the class begin!

Cheers,
-Gil



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Greetings! My first attempt as somthing in the Pre Classic theme.... (URL) for the experiment part. After reading the recent discussions on critiques and their effects and value in the forum, I was wondering was I do with constructive criticism (...) (22 years ago, 13-Feb-03, to lugnet.space)  

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