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Re: MOC: Pre Classic Jump Lander & an experiment....
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lugnet.space
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Thu, 13 Feb 2003 16:51:05 GMT
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In lugnet.space, Gil Shaw writes:
> Greetings!
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> My first attempt as somthing in the Pre Classic theme....
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> http://home.cogeco.ca/~gtoradoch/Misc/misc_pcsjump.htm
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> Now, for the experiment part.
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> snip<
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> So, this one will be an experiment. As always, all comments are welcome and
> appreciated, but perhaps turn your critical eyes a little more towards this
> one. Once it's been out in the wild for a while and hopefully some notes
> have come back, I'd like to take a look at it again and incoporate some of
> the ideas suggested. As we all know, we build for ourselves and our own
> satisfaction so your critiques may be applicable or might not be depending
> on how they mesh with the model. This is a true community of artists -
> people who inspire, educate and ground one another. I would attribute much
> of my enjoyment and personal satisfaction with the Brick to the silent
> tuteledge of all the builders here. I see this experiment as yet another
> lesson for me...let the class begin!
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> Cheers,
> -Gil
Hey, that's a cool MOC! I really like anything with a 'tri' shape to it.
Suggestions:
1) Change the skis to something bigger; they don't look like they'd hold the
ship up very well.
2) Add a bit more light gray to the rear end of the ship; the back looks
sort of 'bleached' (but I don't like white very much anyway)
3) Switch the canopy for a non-printed one.
Keep Building,
Nathan Wells
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