Well all, here is another update. I think it is Part VIII. The story in now
complete, and I think it will last two more days if I post my standard four
scene updates daily. I might do a double posting tomorrow so I don't have to
break up the conclusion. It is actually one scene longer than the Cave of Terror
story.
Well here are the last scenes in the story. Hope you liked it. I'd be grateful for comments, so I can improve my work, both building and writing. Is there anything you think I did well and would like to see more of? Anything you think I did poorly (...) (19 years ago, 10-Jan-05, to lugnet.adventurers, lugnet.general)
I must be on a roll, but since I am hoping to have the story finished by the time school starts, I decided to up the ante a bit. So, here is a double dose of Johnny Thunder's Adventures: (URL) whole thing (thus far), when moderated: (URL) are (...) (19 years ago, 8-Jan-05, to lugnet.adventurers, lugnet.general)
