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Re: The Epic Chronicles of Ikros Continue!
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Thu, 31 May 2001 04:36:38 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, David Simmons writes:
> Anthony,
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> First of all I must apologize for not reading your story before now. I plan
> to start at the beginning so that I'll be caught up with all of the history
> of all the characters.
No apologies necessary, to each his own pace. I'll admit I complain sometimes
that people look at my stories only for the pictures, but in the end, as long
as they enjoy what I've done, that's all that matters to me.
> I really enjoyed the new chapters. The writing is
> good, although for me the characters sometimes tend to state the obvious or
> repeat information already revealed in the text. However, this is a very
> minor criticism, since the pictures are so terrific, I find myself rushing
> through to the text so that I can spend more time looking at that fantastic
> dragon!
Well, I was trying to make a story that could be told without pictures, though
I don't know how good a job I did on that front.
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> Anthony, you also have a real talent for visual composition. The
> combination of real background images and your creations in the foreground
> is great. I especially enjoyed the shot of the dragon on page 3 of "The
> Arrival." That is a terrific picture. Excellent composition. I also
> really appreciate your sparing use of digital enhancement after the photos
> have been taken. The fire effects and the pools of blood are just enough to
> get the job done without cluttering up the picture.
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> Excellent, excellent work! Keep it comin'!
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> Dave
I thank you very much for the kind words. I don't think my pictures and
storylines are worth all the praise they get, but it always makes my day to
read compliments on them.
--Anthony
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> Anthony Sava <ajs0093@pop.tamu.edu> wrote in message
> news:GE07y7.t9@lugnet.com...
> > My friends, I come before you a man reborn. And to celebrate my • reentrance
> > into legoland, I give you the next installment of the Chronicles of Ikros.
> > Simply go to the 'story' link on my page and the links will be there.
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> > Added:
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> > Chapter 9 - In the Shadow of Death, Part 2
> > (Unillustrated)
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> > Chapter 10 - The Arrival
> > (Illustrated, 4 pages)
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> > I hope you enjoy them, and PLMKWYT
> >
> > http://www.geocities.com/savatheaggie/legohome.html
> >
> > --Anthony
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| Anthony Sava <ajs0093@pop.tamu.edu> wrote in message news:GE6nH2.IM2@lugnet.com... (...) sometimes (...) long (...) I've started to read the prologue and I like it very much. The only suggestion I could make would be to separate all the paragraphs (...) (23 years ago, 31-May-01, to lugnet.castle)
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| Anthony, First of all I must apologize for not reading your story before now. I plan to start at the beginning so that I'll be caught up with all of the history of all the characters. I really enjoyed the new chapters. The writing is good, although (...) (23 years ago, 27-May-01, to lugnet.castle)
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