To LUGNET HomepageTo LUGNET News HomepageTo LUGNET Guide Homepage
 Help on Searching
 
Post new message to lugnet.castleOpen lugnet.castle in your NNTP NewsreaderTo LUGNET News Traffic PageSign In (Members)
 Castle / 9224
9223  |  9225
Subject: 
Re: The Epic Chronicles of Ikros Continue!
Newsgroups: 
lugnet.castle
Date: 
Thu, 31 May 2001 04:36:38 GMT
Viewed: 
412 times
  
In lugnet.castle, David Simmons writes:
Anthony,

First of all I must apologize for not reading your story before now.  I plan
to start at the beginning so that I'll be caught up with all of the history
of all the characters.

No apologies necessary, to each his own pace.  I'll admit I complain sometimes
that people look at my stories only for the pictures, but in the end, as long
as they enjoy what I've done, that's all that matters to me.

I really enjoyed the new chapters.  The writing is
good, although for me the characters sometimes tend to state the obvious or
repeat information already revealed in the text.  However, this is a very
minor criticism, since the pictures are so terrific, I find myself rushing
through to the text so that I can spend more time looking at that fantastic
dragon!

Well, I was trying to make a story that could be told without pictures, though
I don't know how good a job I did on that front.

Anthony, you also have a real talent for visual composition.  The
combination of real background images and your creations in the foreground
is great.  I especially enjoyed the shot of the dragon on page 3 of "The
Arrival."  That is a terrific picture.   Excellent composition.  I also
really appreciate your sparing use of digital enhancement after the photos
have been taken.  The fire effects and the pools of blood are just enough to
get the job done without cluttering up the picture.

Excellent, excellent work!  Keep it comin'!

Dave

I thank you very much for the kind words.  I don't think my pictures and
storylines are worth all the praise they get, but it always makes my day to
read compliments on them.

--Anthony

Anthony Sava <ajs0093@pop.tamu.edu> wrote in message
news:GE07y7.t9@lugnet.com...
My friends, I come before you a man reborn.  And to celebrate my • reentrance
into legoland, I give you the next installment of the Chronicles of Ikros.
Simply go to the 'story' link on my page and the links will be there.

Added:

Chapter 9 - In the Shadow of Death, Part 2
     (Unillustrated)

Chapter 10 - The Arrival
     (Illustrated, 4 pages)

I hope you enjoy them, and PLMKWYT

http://www.geocities.com/savatheaggie/legohome.html

--Anthony



Message has 1 Reply:
  Re: The Epic Chronicles of Ikros Continue!
 
Anthony Sava <ajs0093@pop.tamu.edu> wrote in message news:GE6nH2.IM2@lugnet.com... (...) sometimes (...) long (...) I've started to read the prologue and I like it very much. The only suggestion I could make would be to separate all the paragraphs (...) (23 years ago, 31-May-01, to lugnet.castle)

Message is in Reply To:
  Re: The Epic Chronicles of Ikros Continue!
 
Anthony, First of all I must apologize for not reading your story before now. I plan to start at the beginning so that I'll be caught up with all of the history of all the characters. I really enjoyed the new chapters. The writing is good, although (...) (23 years ago, 27-May-01, to lugnet.castle)

16 Messages in This Thread:







Entire Thread on One Page:
Nested:  All | Brief | Compact | Dots
Linear:  All | Brief | Compact

This Message and its Replies on One Page:
Nested:  All | Brief | Compact | Dots
Linear:  All | Brief | Compact
    

Custom Search

©2005 LUGNET. All rights reserved. - hosted by steinbruch.info GbR