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Re: Your Feedback
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lugnet.org
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Wed, 9 Feb 2000 21:41:03 GMT
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Thank you for your feedback. Again, I must stress that I am aware of these
things, and being a new site, we have a lot to do. Expect errors like these,
and understand that everything is on a waiting list to be fixed. Aaron
In lugnet.org, Peter Vogel writes:
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> "Aaron Bergman" <Legomaster24@hotmail.com> wrote in message
> news:FpDIJr.G3L@lugnet.com...
> > We want to know what you would like to see on the future KIDLUG. Check us • out
> > at kidlug.com and tell us what you think. Note, the support@kidlug.com • email
> > does not exist yet.
> > Aaron
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> Looks pretty good, ignore the jerk who said otherwise.
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> That said...
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> 3rd person plural possessive is "their" not "there" (as in cannot yet join
> THEIR lug) "Their Lug meets
> over there."
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> Run on sentence in the first sentence of the "Meetings" section. Need a
> period after "here at
> KIDLUG". Next sentence should being with "Although" not "though".
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> "the Lego Enfield." does not parse, either "Lego Enfield" or "the Lego
> Enfield plant".
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> Verb tense disagreement in the icons section. "Represented" is past tense,
> you want future
> tense. "Which icon theme do you think would best REPRESENT our message
> board.
> Or, you might want future perfect: "Which icon theme do you think would be
> best represented on our
> message board" In the list of choices "Standard" not "Standerd". Should
> something be changing
> when a selection is made on the theme form?
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> You have a missing image in the "Links" page.
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> Again, GREAT start!
>
> -Peter
>
> --
> Peter A. Vogel
> Release Engineering Manager
> iReady Corporation
> http://www.iready.com http://www.iready.net
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