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Re: Your Feedback
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Wed, 9 Feb 2000 19:06:30 GMT
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"Aaron Bergman" <Legomaster24@hotmail.com> wrote in message
news:FpDIJr.G3L@lugnet.com...
> We want to know what you would like to see on the future KIDLUG. Check us • out
> at kidlug.com and tell us what you think. Note, the support@kidlug.com • email
> does not exist yet.
> Aaron
Looks pretty good, ignore the jerk who said otherwise.
That said...
3rd person plural possessive is "their" not "there" (as in cannot yet join
THEIR lug) "Their Lug meets
over there."
Run on sentence in the first sentence of the "Meetings" section. Need a
period after "here at
KIDLUG". Next sentence should being with "Although" not "though".
"the Lego Enfield." does not parse, either "Lego Enfield" or "the Lego
Enfield plant".
Verb tense disagreement in the icons section. "Represented" is past tense,
you want future
tense. "Which icon theme do you think would best REPRESENT our message
board.
Or, you might want future perfect: "Which icon theme do you think would be
best represented on our
message board" In the list of choices "Standard" not "Standerd". Should
something be changing
when a selection is made on the theme form?
You have a missing image in the "Links" page.
Again, GREAT start!
-Peter
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Peter A. Vogel
Release Engineering Manager
iReady Corporation
http://www.iready.com http://www.iready.net
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| Thank you for your feedback. Again, I must stress that I am aware of these things, and being a new site, we have a lot to do. Expect errors like these, and understand that everything is on a waiting list to be fixed. Aaron (...) (24 years ago, 9-Feb-00, to lugnet.org)
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| We want to know what you would like to see on the future KIDLUG. Check us out at kidlug.com and tell us what you think. Note, the support@kidlug.com email does not exist yet. Aaron (24 years ago, 3-Feb-00, to lugnet.org)
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