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Re: The Sages
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Wed, 23 Aug 2000 19:54:54 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Shiri Dori writes:
> In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Leah Cardaci writes:
> > http://www.lugnet.com/castle/org/cw/~397/Factions/Sages
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> > Please, LMKWYT.
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> Good stuff, Leah! That's a great interpretation of the RDP (if that *is*
> one ;-) - much more interesting than mine, thasfersure. Mine was really quite
> plain, and I think having some very elaborate ones would be quite
> interesting... Especially when incorporated in a building, I know Craig has
> plans for something of that sort, and I'm keeping it in mind for when-I-
> construct-Gareth's-house. <grin>
At first the portal was just supposed to be a simple design, but it somehow
ended up being much more detailed than I had planned. I'm happy with the final
results though. :-)
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> The story is interesting, but I must say that reading it I realized something
> (for myself, too) - having new paragraphs for each sentence in FTX is a pain.
> I suggest you (and I, when I get a sec ;-) use the break-character, otherwise
> the page looks like a collection of random sentences. <frown>
<embarrassed look> Thanks for the advice. I see what you mean. In
the "discussion" scene which is full of one and one-and-a-half line
paragraphs, this is quite distracting. I've fixed this, and I *think* it looks
all right now.
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> Otherwise, though, I enjoyed the reading - made sense and flowed quite nicely.
> The characters are great too!
Thanks!
-L
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> -Shiri
> p.s. I land on Sunday... finally some quality online time!!
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