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Hi all! Having recently submitted my application to Castle World, I've decided to also get involved in the Isle of Mist adventure. My CW signature character, Lord Bertar, King's Governor of The Great Desert, is leading an expedition to the Isle of (...) (23 years ago, 26-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Welcome! I'm new here myself, and it's a lot of fun reading all the stories people have been posting. (...) I like the story so far. You have some interesting character relationships going already. I can't wait for the pics! -- Tony Hafner (...) (23 years ago, 26-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) I like both the format of the page, and the stories on there so far. One little quib that I have is the font size - I feel old saying this (what did you say sonny?), but could you make the fontsize bigger? My eyes will thank you :) Good intro (...) (23 years ago, 27-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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Hey Stephen, Welcome aboard! I read your prologue, when it was posted, with great interest. It's good to see you develop your characters and setting further. I'm also wondering what Galith looks like... I agree with Pawel on the layout - it's very (...) (23 years ago, 27-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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Pawel, Thanks for the compliments! I had wondered about whether the text size was adequate, with the proper balance between readability and page compactness. I will probably increase the font to make it easier to read. I guess I thought it was okay (...) (23 years ago, 27-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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Hey Shiri, (...) I remember your compliments on my initial posting way back when the IOM saga began ((URL) I was wondering if anyone would remember that, since it's been so long since I've added anything to Bertar's story. As for Galith, I can't get (...) (23 years ago, 27-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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Hey Tony, (...) Thanks! I think it makes things a little more interesting when there's some potential for conflict or separate agendas within the members of the expedition (I like the way Sorjin has his own agenda, and his two hired assistants just (...) (23 years ago, 28-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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