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Re: Blank Shields IoM update
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Fri, 26 Oct 2001 21:20:17 GMT
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> thoughts?
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> thanks,
For what you are using, 3rd person works very well. It's just like a
military report that I'm reading from CNN :) It
doesn't tell you much, but you know something is going on.
-- Pawel
http://www.geocities.com/cw_isleofmist/
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| (...) Ya, that's kinda what I'm going for right now; I'm just wondering if people think a third-person style of narrative would be OK for a more substantial story. More like my "history" chapters(1), although much more real-time than they are, and (...) (23 years ago, 26-Oct-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (URL) now at least, I'm keeping the Blank Shield updates to this sort of "news bite" feeling. Once I clear the detritus from making my entry for the Midnight MOCkery contest, I'll be able to start taking pictures of the transportation, and move to (...) (23 years ago, 26-Oct-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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