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Re: Blank Shields IoM update
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Fri, 26 Oct 2001 21:59:08 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Pawel Nazarewicz writes:
> > thoughts?
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> > thanks,
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> For what you are using, 3rd person works very well. It's just like a
> military report that I'm reading from CNN :) It
> doesn't tell you much, but you know something is going on.
Ya, that's kinda what I'm going for right now; I'm just wondering if people
think a third-person style of narrative would be OK for a more substantial
story. More like my "history" chapters(1), although much more real-time
than they are, and with pictures. :)
thanks,
James
1:http://www.lugnet.com/castle/~11/blankshields/hist
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Message has 1 Reply: | | Re: Blank Shields IoM update
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| (...) Oh, it'd definitely be fine to use third person for a narrative. As an outsider, you can still make a great interesting story and develop characters.... techniques could be, for example, telling people's thoughts (if you're an omnipotent 3rd (...) (23 years ago, 27-Oct-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) For what you are using, 3rd person works very well. It's just like a military report that I'm reading from CNN :) It doesn't tell you much, but you know something is going on. -- Pawel (URL) (23 years ago, 26-Oct-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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