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| (URL) now at least, I'm keeping the Blank Shield updates to this sort of "news bite" feeling. Once I clear the detritus from making my entry for the Midnight MOCkery contest, I'll be able to start taking pictures of the transportation, and move to (...) (23 years ago, 26-Oct-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
| | | | | Re: Blank Shields IoM update
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| (...) For what you are using, 3rd person works very well. It's just like a military report that I'm reading from CNN :) It doesn't tell you much, but you know something is going on. -- Pawel (URL) (23 years ago, 26-Oct-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
| | | | | Re: Blank Shields IoM update
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| (...) Ya, that's kinda what I'm going for right now; I'm just wondering if people think a third-person style of narrative would be OK for a more substantial story. More like my "history" chapters(1), although much more real-time than they are, and (...) (23 years ago, 26-Oct-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) Oh, it'd definitely be fine to use third person for a narrative. As an outsider, you can still make a great interesting story and develop characters.... techniques could be, for example, telling people's thoughts (if you're an omnipotent 3rd (...) (23 years ago, 27-Oct-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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